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Jessie's avatar

This poemmmmm. This poem. The pacing, the crescendo, the gall of silence!

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emma murf's avatar

Oooo I love the word “gall” for silence. Mmmm. I’m storing that down deep ❤️

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Jess Patrice's avatar

I really like the imagery you use when you write, and the end of the poem really ties in everything beautifully at the end, I love it :)

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emma murf's avatar

Thank you so much, Jess! That means the world to me.

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Jess Patrice's avatar

Anytime; you are a beautiful writer :)

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